Friday, February 4, 2011

poster series

here are the posters that I displayed for critique. during the week I was thinking of phrases that I could illustrate for the poster.

Kid:
-I have the courage to speak in class
-I can do 20 push-ups
-I have new role models
-I have new friends that have my back
-I speak my voice now without what others will think
-I love being part of a team
-I now have the confidence to ask for help when I’m stuck
-I never want to let my coaches down
-I can focus more in class
-I want to be just like
-I don't want to let my coaches down
-I am motivated and don't want to give up
-what would my coach suggest?
-I can learn from my mistakes
-I want to do well in school
-I don't want to quit
-My coaches really care about my success
-Without UP!, I never would have met Raoul.

Parent:
- The coaches with UP! are entirely motivating -- teaching my son healthy ways to compete.
-I always wanted my son to find his niche in life
-my son's passion is baseball
-my son has tremendous male role models in his life
-mike can't wait for his next practice
-my daughter has a goal
-the quality of my son's homework has improved
-the coaches have been a strong positive role model in my daughter's life
-my daughter is making friends more easily

Coach:
-I can still incorporate the sport of baseball in my life
-I see the kids in a new light










From the feedback I received, the posters didn't seem connected. Now I'm looking to use phrases that have the word up.

my initial list:
batter up
wake up
eat up
Speak Up
Get Up
Stay Up
Be Up
Stand Up
Always Up
Up, Up and Away
Up we go
Looking Up
Growing Up
Mentally Up
Gearing Up
Showing Up
Keeping Up
Keep Up
Never Give Up
Totally Up
Setting Up

1 comment:

  1. Hey Jayme-

    I hope you got my email about the feedback from the group critique. These posters are really coming along- and a few tweaks would really help them out- I think I wrote this in the email, but people made some really great, and really specific suggestions about what you could do. For instance, adding a window to the poster with the bags- would go along with what the poster says- it would be tempting us to get outside. Also, the poster with the grass and the child studying could be separated into two different posters. I really like the imagery associated with the grass- but I wonder if you could change the wording so that we are excited about being in the outfield (which normally isn't a great thing- as people were saying in crit- because children don't often hit the ball to the outfield). Maybe something about catching fly balls?

    Anyway, I'm excited to see where these are going- can't wait to see more-

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