Next week, I am looking to create more action images. I'm not so sure if I like the plain background. I've been looking at texture for backgrounds and like the pattern I am making with the grass and dirt, this seems a little more expressive than what I have been making.
I really like the last image that you posted, with the view looking up at a team huddle. I think this emphasizes the idea of different kids coming together through a sport... this idea is aimed at both kids and parents. However, there are a few odd areas (the bottom corners) where I'm not really sure of the forms, and wear things start and end. It needs a bit more clarity. The image with the hands in and yellow jerseys is really working as well... I think you should play up the idea of team more. Also, I'm glad you're playing with the different ".... up" phrases, though the images your have placed them with are rather plain. Try incorporating the phrases with stronger images, like the team ones.
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